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    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1483 Copy

    Lil' Blue

    Why could Yerin read London's Unsouled badge if she never heard of the concept and can't read?

    Will Wight

    The Unsouled badge has a single symbol from the old language on it, and it's established in Blackflame that Yerin can read and/or recognize some of those symbols, because they're used in cycling manuals.

    Lil' Blue

    As a followup Will, I'd buy that if Yerin said "Empty?" which is what the character means but she said "Unsouled?" She didn't know what that concept meant and there were definitely none in the Heaven's Glory school. So, did she see other Unsouled and that's how she knew?

    Will Wight

    She said she’d never heard of that concept before reaching the Valley, not before meeting Lindon.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1484 Copy

    OrgnlDave

    Will the reason I asked about Raw Shark Texts is because I thought it might be good instruction for Lindon x Yerin

    Will Wight

    Their next villain will be the text on the page, forming itself into a shark to devour their conceptual existence

    OrgnlDave

    that's actually that could work in Cradle

    Will Wight

    Yeah, as I said it, that actually wasn’t too absurd for the Abidan.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1488 Copy

    OrgnlDave

    I think that the plot synopses of your novels could use some work.

    Will Wight

    Re:synopses, I know, I just hate writing them. And the synopses for sequels don’t matter to almost anyone, so it’s hard to take them seriously. Only the first book really matters, and even then apparently not much.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1489 Copy

    OrgnlDave

    Actually Will, that's the perfect way to introduce it, Yerin x Lindon kissed between books, but when we get to Underlord, she's pulled back because her blood shadow tried to kill him or something and now she's struggling with it or SOMETHING LIKE THAT totally works it into the plot, see?

    Will Wight

    I would love to do that, but my challenge is doing more character/relational development in scene. Have to step up.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1490 Copy

    Lil' Blue

    Lindon and Yerin go to an "educational dream tablet viewing" a.k.a a date.

    Tievel

    If we ever get a scene or story about those two going on a date, I definitely want it to be Yerin who plans the outing. Because I imagine that would be hilarious.

    OrgnlDave

    How would Lindon be any less hilarious? he knows nothing about the world or women?

    Will Wight

    I know I’ve said this a lot, but it bears repeating: the main reason there hasn’t been overt romantic development in Cradle thus far is because it’s hard to find space. Not my unwillingness to write it. There just aren’t many purely character/relational scenes in the whole series. So I need to either make room for those, thus potentially altering the fundamental formula of the series thus far, or find a way to work the same level of relational development into plot scenes. I’m trying the second one, but it’s hard.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1492 Copy

    OrgnlDave

    What's a fanfic you'd write?

    Will Wight

    No joke, I seriously considered writing a real DBZ-inspired fantasy series. Some of the elements could work wonders in a novel series. Yeah, 90% filler and 9% powering up. The magic system isn’t necessarily too simple, it just isn’t developed. If it were, and given actual rules, it could work. The same fights become tactical and more dramatic when you understand the interplay of the magic system. But the main thing that got me interested was the constant tension they keep the reader in. The false climactic fights, the ramp-up of tension, the continued escalation of stakes... DBZ doesn’t have real rules. Or rather, they do in individual chapters/episodes, but the rules change so frequently and arbitrarily that it might as well not. So people making fan charts and speculating on power levels from Super might as well not bother, because there is no real answer. I vividly remember my collection of DBZ tapes.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1494 Copy

    Lil' Blue

    Is madra a series of tubes?

    Will Wight

    Madra itself is not a series of tubes, but it can exist only in the context of a series of loops and channels that might be described as tubes. Bindings and scripts re-pattern madra in order to control it and produce different effects, so you might say that madra in its natural state is ALWAYS cycling through an interconnected network of tubes. So while madra is not a series of tubes, the system by which the sacred arts can be performed IS a series of tubes.

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1498 Copy

    Lil' Blue

    Will, I like when you use easily searchable words for the archive.

    Will Wight

    Hahaha gotcha, I should say other easily searchable words.   Rutabaga I am committed to developing my characters romantically.   Aardvark if I can figure out how to write stories more efficiently, I hope to scale up my production to a consistent 3 books a year so that I can try more new things

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1499 Copy

    Tower

    My 2 cents is to just leave rape out of books altogether. It's a problem worldwide. We don't need to read about it in a source of ENTERTAINMENT.

    Will Wight

    Eh. It depends on the tone and intent of the work of entertainment in question. Sometimes it’s perfectly appropriate to deal with a heavy subject in a drama designed for entertainment. That said, it’s too heavy for my stuff. I’m not going to give sexual abuse the gravity it deserves, so I’m leaving it out.

    Lil' Blue

    And that's a perfectly acceptable reason, Will. Better to not address it than address it poorly.

    Will Wight

    That’s basically my position. And not every work of fiction can or should deal with every subject, so...

    September 2018 - December 2018 ()
    #1500 Copy

    Lil' Blue

    You should definitely address romance in your books. ;)

    Will Wight

    Shshshshshshshshsssssssshhhhh. Hush now.

    Lil' Blue

    I need an awkward Will protagonist date in my life.

    Will Wight

    Jk, I know you’re right, and it’s going in. I have to practice to learn how to use it effectively, and the only way I practice is through LIVE-FIRE EXERCISE.   Everything that happens to Lindon and/or Simon results in awkwardness.

    Lil' Blue

    "Lindon: So uh...you like swords, right Yerin?"   "Simon: I like my eyes and having both of them."

    Will Wight

    ^ Thats now my favorite. I’m going to try and work that in.