dyring
Question for Will: Are you planning any stories on iterations outside of abidan control? You hinted at a few in one of Suriels chapters, the ones about creatures capable of killing Ozriel, but we have not truly seen any.
(Personally, at first I thought amalgam was outside, until told otherwise. It seemed chaotic with the territories and Valin making one)
Will Wight
Yes!
Puppet Master
if a Sacred Artist used a technique enough in life, is it possible for that technique to be transfered through the bonding of their remnant?
Will Wight
Yes, and this was one of the three reasons for bindings being a thing.
1.) So that sacred artists can inherit techniques from the spirits of their fallen masters/predecessors.
2.) So that Soulsmiths can use techniques as materials.
3.) So that rivals on similar/compatible Paths could potentially kill someone possessing a remarkable technique and steal that technique.
Your Benevolent Dictator
What is your favorite book you've written
Will Wight
Of Dawn and Darkness
Your Benevolent Dictator
Why?
Will Wight
Because I tried a lot of difficult things behind the scenes and they paid off. As opposed to something like Blackflame, which came together well, but was relatively easier so I'm less proud of it.
Lil' Blue
Ugh but Calder
tries to throttle him
Will Wight
Yeah, part of what I did in that series was give the MCs more obvious character flaws. To contrast them with Simon and Lindon, who are fairly straightforward people and more normal protagonists.
But as a result, one or the other usually makes people violently hate them.
I was aware of that risk.
Aru
For real though, one of my favorite activities is logging into Reddit writing prompts or one of my online stories that still has a following and writing "There will be an update soon." And then never releasing an update. It keeps them all in suspense.
Will Wight
That's my release date policy.
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Aru
You can tell that I wrote it because I also used the name "Aru" on that site. Gotta warn you though at this point I was still embracing the "Show, don't tell" to an extreme extent, so the first 50k words takes place over two-ish days.
Will Wight
That happens all the time. "Show, don't tell" has become one of my least-favorite pieces of advice; now my left eye twitches whenever I hear someone say it. First of all, most people don't understand it. What it should mean is "In a story, don't simply tell me something is true when you can show me that it is true." For instance, don't tell me a character is brilliant when you could instead show them doing something brilliant. You want to get the reader to think "Wow, this character is brilliant" without you having told them so. People generally use it to mean "Show us when something happens, don't tell us." This is dangerous because it's both good advice and bad advice. It's a double-edged sword. When something is important or integral to the story, you always want to show it happening in a scene, rather than telling us that it happened in narrative. "Lindon fought a dragon and won" isn't nearly as interesting as a fight scene between Lindon and a dragon. But there are always scenes that you should be telling instead of showing. "Winter passed without incident" is a much better way of summarizing a boring winter rather than ten pages of summarizing boring training and nothing happening, even though the first one is telling you that nothing happened and the second one is showing you that nothing happened. TL;DR - "Show, don't tell" is both so broadly applicable and so frequently misused that it's almost useless except in certain specific circumstances. So even though it's good advice, IMO it confuses new writers more than it teaches them.
Aru
Got 384 pages into it too before I ended up stopping. Part of that was because I improved so much while writing it that the beginning just felt like a hunk of junk. And also because my sense of pacing was waaay off.
Will Wight
Always true. Part of finishing a book is just getting to the end so you can go back and fix the beginning. You usually don't know what your story is about until you finish the first draft. Which is what makes writing serial stories one chapter at a time hard
Aru
Part of the reason I gave it up was because I realized that the first 70 thousand words should have been the first 10 thousand words.
I'm open to criticism though if you, Will, or anybody else wants to skim through a few chapters.
Will Wight
One of the most common problems new writers have is starting way too early. That happens all the time.
Anu
That is, as long as I don't accidentally scrap it and start over again. Sigh. Stories get harder as they reach the actual length you expect them to be.
Will Wight
That's the truth
Anu
Will: Is there a limit to how bad a story you are willing to read? How low are you willing to go?
AKA, now long do I need to spend editing my story before you are willing to read it?
Will Wight
That is one of my favorite questions I've ever gotten. I laughed out loud.
I used to teach Intro to Creative Writing, so there is no rock bottom.
It's an endless freefall.
Puppet Master
did dragons evolve as a species or are they a result of their status of Sacred Beast?
Will Wight
I don't know if this is a spoiler or not, so I'll answer it anyway: sacred beast, but dragons exist in many forms in different Iterations similar to humanity
So the relationship and origin of dragons is a subject of study among Abidan
Icoret
Was the ancestor of dragons a type of fish then, like in that old legend about them climbing up a waterfall? I think yerin said storms turn fish into dragons as part of a saying at one point
Will Wight
No, reptile
Lil' Blue
Are there any sacred beast only villages?
Will Wight
Yes, and hopefully you will get to see an example very soon.
Tievel
I'm bad at emojis
Will Wight
Your emoji skill would improve if you just saw the greatest film ever produced by man
The Emoji Movie
Decadakon
Do you have a small example for a sword related beast
Like is it an animal
With a sword or with sharp claws
Will Wight
It would be more like with sharp claws, though I'm not against a species of sacred beast that uses sword madra/aura to make sharp weapons
Tool-using sacred beasts do exist
Decadakon
Oooohhh are there any sword related sacred beasts? And do you have plans for us to see them?
Will Wight
Yes to both, hopefully.
Tievel
Haha, Sage=special ranked up soulfire confirmed
Will Wight
I did not say that. I said Sages live longer than Archlords, in general.
sadly_streets_behind
Will, have you read Overlord or watched the anime adaptation?
Will Wight
Yes, both! I think that's one of the web novels with the most squandered potential.
In particular, I think it's let down by the MC being undead. So he doesn't have any emotional reaction or physical response to anything.
Therefore, the stakes never feel personal and there's no connection to him. However, Nazarick and the floor guardians are the best ideas anyone in that genre has ever had.
I'm super jealous.
Akrasia
Will, how do you feel about all these litRPG questions despite you having stated that you don't write litrpg?
Will Wight
I'm honestly a little confused by all the LitRPG questions, but I'm cool with answering anything. And I'm not against the concept of LitRPGs in general, I've just never read one that really grabbed me. Which makes me want to try and create one I do like.
Questioner
Word of Will response to :That's a different take on it than I had. At this point, I'm not considering Lindon's personal growth as much as his team's. You've got the sword master with what I assume will eventually be 6 sword arms sticking from her back, the strategist with no outstanding combat strength, and I'm thinking Jai Long and Jai Chen, as well. Overwhelming destructive power was actually missing from their group. Besides that, Lindon's second core is the air of mystery and the unexpected for me. Curious what he's really able to do with it later.
Will Wight
"You've nailed my thought process. My priority is to balance his eventual team more than Lindon as an individual."
Questioner
How are everyday tasks handled?
Will Wight
Different places in the world handle the basic necessities of life differently. Some places have sects that focus entirely on farming or whatever, but other places prize independence and self-sufficiency. Those sacred artists value the ability to provide food, resources, and basic societal infrastructure for the people that depend on them.
Questioner
Would a fire path be one of the fastest way to level up? All you would have to do is stand next to a barn-fire and absorb the ambient fire manna it would give off, then refine it. On that note how different would the manna type be, between different types of fire. A hearth-fire warming a family home in the winter, with all the "happy" connotation that come with it, compared to like an arson attack destroying someone's home and possession and just everything that they have worked for. Both are fire but you get what I mean.
Will Wight
A fire Path would not be the fastest way to advance, because the aura would be slightly rarer and harder to collect compared to, say, earth or air. But it's still very fast, as are all the Paths that draw from aura easily found in nature.
There WOULD be significant differences between those two Paths! Fire from different Paths could take on different qualities depending on how it's used an where it comes from; you could have a gentle flame that spreads slowly and provides lots of even warmth, versus a violent flames that consumes rapidly and burns out quickly.